Monday, April 09, 2007

How you make me feel (ZR)

I see you everyday
those eyes hypmotize me

Your voice is so deep
makes my knees weak

When you touch me
inside I scream

I cant take it
you make me want to cream

To feel you near
thats what I want

Your such a flirt
I see it in your eyes

But something tells me
you dont tell lies

I think you like me
I can feel it when your around

the attraction we have
keeps me off the ground

Someday I'll have you
I just hope it soon

I dont know how much longer
I cant take it without you

4 Comments:

Blogger gP said...

now you have one. :P :P :P

8:25 AM  
Blogger Laura Maria said...

I related to this poem... It's like a snapshot from my life. It's very good and sweet. :) I write poems too, but I rarely publish them. Self-criticism, you know.

1:54 PM  
Blogger Brianinmpls said...

Hot that is all I have to say

6:03 PM  
Blogger Upendra said...

Hello,
I really enjoy your poem too much just a minute ago. Actually, your way feeling presentation is so nice. i like that. Really, I think you are a nice poet of this earth. I hope 'you will be like the Shakespear, Byron and Wordsworth.
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5:44 AM  

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